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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Her tears fell to the floor In ‘I miss you’ formation Patterning her broken heart Liquid dedication Just emotions In remember overflow Soul repeating, I’ll never let you go An ache that doesn’t heal A love that won’t go away Ever constant, silent wish “stay” ~SEA~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
An ache that doesn’t heal A love that won’t go away Ever constant, silent wish “stay” You know I understand this one. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, wow...i certainly was in the right place at the right time to get to read this...beautiful work, a little sad. i love the peaceful and tranquil quality your work has about it. take care. Amy  "you can't stop |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this whispered.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Only stains remain for the tears have dried without extinguishing the ache of your leaving So I wear this in memory of you Very nicely done Sea.. it does whisper.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl as always you write these with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The gentle softness of a hearts whisper Well done darling girl, very very well done As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May I ditto Sunshine, it did! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Pretty (((hugs))) me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very pretty Sea...and ditto Sunshine too. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ever constant. . . yes. . . very well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh..I wish I didn't feel so much like this. You hit my heart, as usual. Sandra |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
as usual, you manage to exactly convey a complex emotion, simply. a feat not everyone can manage. nice. -dave |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Her tears fell to the floor In "I miss you" formation Patterning her broken heart Liquid dedication =========================== that verse is cooler than even I know  the ache always stays...this we know. (at least it makes for unending inspire for our mothy muse) Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, may her hearts wish be answered and may true love forever sing to her heart as I wish this for you too! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sensitive and gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Perfect. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The power of the SEA and such devine poetry! Powerful and short and so well written... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so quietly earnest. Beautiful writing Sea. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much....I'm just wondering when this ache is going to subside....so far, not yet it means a lot to me that you all took the time to read this "ache" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Susan...as always a wonderful gem. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa, this IS beautiful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
I dont know what to say that everyone else already hasnt... this is a beautiful poem... you write of emotions that are so hard to deal with and explain in a way in which the whole world can understand... very good job |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly beautiful, SEA... I know the ache... and thank you for knowing the words. *S* |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, you know how to write the pain so well. This is like a soft sigh from the heart. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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