Open Poetry #19 |
One of true... |
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Looking through the stain of glass are shattered hopes and dreams of past as I lay awake each passing night to find myself at break of dawn with fingertips stretched out in plea if only I could believe his love for me is one of true... How can this be a simple task allowing him to enter in this world of which I seek retreat from fantasy and what is real where in a cage surrendered are these feelings of abandon of once upon a time before... Each new day time tick's away and I find myself yearning to be found in eyes turquoise blue if only I could believe his love for me is one of true... A simple task as said above letting go of distant past yet readiness to commit into the bond of togetherness is something quite perplexing still if mind and heart are spinning in the opposite of twirls... And so alone in deepest thought I sit today with tears that trace the outline of the child in me an innocence I hold dear not knowing what to do or say to convince myself and believe his love for me is one of true... *~Coco~* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a wonderful poem, and a picture of what happens when you can't let go of a past hurt. Well done. Nan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ Just a lovely, lovely write~ 'yearning to be found in eyes turquoise blue if only I could believe his love for me is one of true...' It's so good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Sadly wonderful write! Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (03-26-2002 01:54 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Never stop believing for the day you do true love will be forever lost. You write so very well my poet friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I seek retreat from fantasy and what is real where in a cage surrendered are these feelings of abandon of once upon a time before... Love this verse...very cool write, Coco! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hello PoetFriend Coco. . . there is only one way to know. . . ask your heart. . . wonderful from you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetPoetFriends, I thank you profoundly4embracing me in your friendship eachNevery day... Hugs2u Pilgrimage, Marge, Lunatic, Interloper, Duncan and SweetieSven... *~coco~* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
not knowing what to do or say to convince myself and believe his love for me is one of true... How very beautiful this is. *S* And it's so true... each hurt makes it harder to find the faith that someone is true... each wrong choice makes it harder to give someone else a chance, each heartache makes it harder to trust your own judgement. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My sincere thanx2uSuthern for your reply2me touches my heart... You're a SweetAngelPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know how you feel and I hope soon he can reach out to you and then you will know with all your heart the answer to your question! (kiss on cheek) I hope this is true love for you, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Coco, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coco I find that there are only a few people in a lifetime that really stand out and seem to be a special one...these are the ones I could not turn away from even if I tried...win or lose...and each time my heart hopes she is the one of true...quite honestly the one I am with now seems to be very sincere...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mistletoe ((noah)), you're a darling you know that huh and my heart hugz ya rite back sweetie and as4those muahhhhhhhz well here's one rite back on your cheek sweetPoetFriend... James, your replies2what I write have always brought a smile unto my heart and I wish2thank you for that cuz you're special PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
yet readiness to commit into the bond of togetherness is something quite perplexing still if mind and heart are spinning in the opposite of twirls... Sounds like the old push and pull of emotions spent. I enjoy your words and don't see them here often enough. Lots of love and truth in this. Thanks. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
May love reach out to you and fill your heart with warmth and may it always lighten your path. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
coco, this is such a beautiful reply my friend! I related to the words you penned more than you know...love is so risky sometimes, we put our hearts on the line never knowing, but you know what? it's worth the risk...it really is ;-) hang in there...and i hope true love has found its way to you...you deserve it! take care sweetie. amy "you can't stop |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Blues... you're a sweetie4saying what you did in reply2me and I thank you bearrrrrrrry much4your kind words2mePoetFriend... Charisma... I've missed you sooooo much and seeing you in reply box has me hyped2go out on a treasure hunt in the wee hours of the nite this weekend and find myself a gem2read that you have penned once again... Aimster... you're always there in spirit by my side 'sweetAmy' and your words in reply just reinforce that more than ever and from my heart2u bigggggggggggggg hugzPoetFriend you're a jewel.... *~coco~* |
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