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Open Poetry #19

The Captain's View

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-03-22 11:07 AM

The Captain’s View

Landlocked
in tall frame only
eyes holding imagination

of panoramas yet to be explored

he will take you
with him
not promising you won’t
become sea-sick
with sway of recollect

as he picks up stones
off the bank
and with deadly aim

fishes you back
out of the water

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-03-22 11:09 AM

Deca...this is perfect!! You're on a roll, girl!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-03-22 11:19 AM

(chuckling) hmmm not sure whether to be honored or wonder how cruel you think I am...

Deca

Then ten times
she shared
more than centuries
passed
inside the words heart
beating life to one
not as well framed
with light

Character
painted her canvas image
hiding behind the knows
of someone elses stare

Deca
times ten
the words multiply
what we feel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-22 06:40 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this had me envisioning as though I was a bluejacket staring out from the crows nest over the sea at sunrise, this is such a beautifully peaceful verse! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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