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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-03-22 09:07 AM

Dark Stranger

He was not so
Dark in his enlightenment

This stranger that
Crept in

A twisting turn
Of honor bent

Swept me right within

He cornered my eye
With deepest, pure intent

In dark of night
He honored me

Then by his whisper, went

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-03-22 09:11 AM

Sounds like gentleman... that left the whispers to remind you that one doesn't have to talk loud to be hears or to make a lasting impression.

nicely done...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-03-22 09:13 AM

Deca,
I know just what you mean

excellent penning here

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-22 09:17 AM

Decaflame,
Enjoyed, good write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-03-22 09:54 AM

Hm, I think I know this guy, too. No gentleman in the long run.
Very effective.
Sandra

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-03-22 10:01 AM

Deca

The atmosphere in this captures the imagination...loved it!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-03-22 10:06 AM

Deca....would be a pleasure to consider
such a blessing..that this was of someone with a name like mine

and Sandra doesn't know ME (grin)

just pretending it is me..thank you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-03-22 10:15 AM

DecaFlame~
VERY nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-03-22 10:35 AM

"Then by his whisper, went"
Very nice indeed, Decaflame

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-22 06:35 PM

BRAVO!!! Wow, this is a wonderful inspirational poem, sweet friend, I think Dark Stranger can be a metaphor to so much, this is a wonderful vision of him! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for shsring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2002-03-22 06:44 PM

Excellent...this flows beautifully.

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