Open Poetry #19 |
Dark Stranger |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Dark Stranger He was not so Dark in his enlightenment This stranger that Crept in A twisting turn Of honor bent Swept me right within He cornered my eye With deepest, pure intent In dark of night He honored me Then by his whisper, went |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sounds like gentleman... that left the whispers to remind you that one doesn't have to talk loud to be hears or to make a lasting impression. nicely done... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Deca, I know just what you mean excellent penning here |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Enjoyed, good write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, I think I know this guy, too. No gentleman in the long run. Very effective. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca The atmosphere in this captures the imagination...loved it! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Deca....would be a pleasure to consider such a blessing..that this was of someone with a name like mine and Sandra doesn't know ME (grin) just pretending it is me..thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ VERY nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Then by his whisper, went" Very nice indeed, Decaflame Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Wow, this is a wonderful inspirational poem, sweet friend, I think Dark Stranger can be a metaphor to so much, this is a wonderful vision of him! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for shsring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent...this flows beautifully. |
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