Open Poetry #19 |
A little light |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A little light I light a little light at night to help me find my way Because at night my sight's not right Unless I light a little light at night That I don't need in the day. But in the day I'll just say that the sun is bright So I don't light a little light that I light at night For in the day I need some shade to hide the light That helps my sight and is so bright That's not there at night to help me find my way. So I must find a little tree that hides the sun for me Cause shade is made in the day and that way I get enough light from the sun that's bright But not too bright in the shade that's made So I don't need to light a light to find my way in the day And I can play during the day and I have sight at night That's just right. Cause I light a little light at night. Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida May 4, 2000 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love your usage of alliteration and consonance in this, this makes the poem so fun to read when I read it to myself! (big hugggsssss) Your words are always sunshine to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, vandana. ((vandana)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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