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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-22 03:30 PM


Dies

"For the wages of sin is death, but the gift of God is eternal life in Christ Jesus our Lord."
NIV Romans 6:23

I am God, The Creator of It All
One Hot Spirit exploding heated gas
A tree of flames I send my fervent call
Into Firmament changing void to mass.

A little spirit I made on small earth
With spirit tools to play in joy one day
Created Woman to nourish small births
Decorate My Kingdom with Love, Her Way.

I made an Angel to Try man's quick soul
Through Woman, man fell selfishly into
Bad spirit play by making fleshly poles
Enslaving souls in bondage, what they do.

For all of life I made just to connect
Into My Tree restoring power free
Man reversed polarity, disconnect
ed, and sought to live alone without Me.

Made a mess of everything he tries
Forsakes all truth and speaks with evil lies.

Dies.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
February 22, 2002


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1 posted 2002-02-22 04:19 PM


True enough, mankind has sure screwed things up.
Peace
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-02-22 04:27 PM


Sure has! But I think that women have done a pretty good job over all, in spite of men.
Just a little predudice on my part.
((Sandra))
-newell

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strbbux
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3 posted 2002-02-22 04:41 PM


Well, truth here Newell. Man can sure mess up everything without God in his life. Great write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-22 04:44 PM


a very truthful poem you've penned here!
Men need God just as much as they need women in their life

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5 posted 2002-02-22 05:44 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Newell, I know just how you feel, it tok saddens me to see all of mankind straying from our Lord and making sin out of the gift He has bestowed upon us all. (sad sigh) I pray that we can all find Him and love Him just as much as we love women! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-22 06:57 PM


Thank you, floria. You are so right.
((floria))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-02-22 07:00 PM


Joanna, you are absolutely right. God knew that man couldn't do it alone, even though man would try. And so he LOANED man, Woman. And then man tried to hijack God's most precious gem. Even so, God loves man and sent a Son to die to save man from death. Now that's true love!
((Joanna))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-02-22 07:01 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.
((Noah))
-newell

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9 posted 2002-04-05 02:22 PM


enjoyed
Silver Streak
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10 posted 2002-04-05 02:38 PM


Thank you, vandana!

((vandana))
-newell

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strbbux
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11 posted 2002-04-05 02:56 PM


Man always makes a mess of everything when he is without God. Nice poem Newell. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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12 posted 2002-04-05 03:00 PM


You are so right, floria! Thanks for commenting.

((floria))
-newell

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