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Lovers Tie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lovers Tie Shimmers in the bright of light Whispers in the dark of night Visions of a worthy goal Tremors of a loving soul Touches of a passion’s lot Tying of a lovers knot Opening the secret door Looking at forever more. Declarations of declare Vows implied in open air Promising a hearts endure Honoring a pledged amour. Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. This is the way of lovers vie This is the stay of lovers tie. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed sounds like the forging of love..well said my friend..well said indeed |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a great piece, dear Sy... A fitting tribute to the bonds of love...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may she forever hold your heart dear and cradle it with her vows and unconditional love always for you as you do the same! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful poem of true love growing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
complicated contentment lies in the read of poets' Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you for the indeed. Nan, Thank you sweet.  Noah, Always enjoy yor comments. Sunshine, Right, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Touches of a passion's lot Tying of a lovers knot Opening the secret door Looking at forever more. ================================= Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. This is the way of lovers vie This is the stay of lovers tie. ================================== only you could write a couplet so cool about couples  and this verse will be the coolest and most rhyme divine that I'll read today Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. *sigh* beautiful Stinky. *ww*  Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a really nice poem!!!!! I love this part especially!!  Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This is the stay of lovers tie.' The ribboning of love deserves such a special tie. Beautifully written sweet poet~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful writing, just perfect. Sandra |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour This was loving , romantically devine bonds tied , lovers entwine Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Once more I open up the door To look into my soul once more To take a taste and stir the blend To simmer to a proper end Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Thank you Mon Cherie. Marge, Thank you Sandra. HopeS, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, it's poems like these that make you SIR  This is beautifully penned and very original. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Comming from you I am honored. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it, The flow and the structure of this is excellent, as is the rhyme scheme. You really are a fine writer. Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed, you have again written this with your customary skill and grace. Wonderful Seymour darling boy utterly wonderful. Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. This is the way of lovers vie This is the stay of lovers tie. This is exquisite writing darling boy absolutely exquisite  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Pressure makes the circle bend Bending it from end to end And when the harmony is done The two of them become as one. Damn, cool verse, Sy! Feel the love! |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
This is a Beautiful Post I enjoyed it. A Musician must make his Music, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your superlatives are grand. Duncan, Thank you for the cool. PoetriPrincess, Thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah but you suit that name of yours well, Sy, for this brought a gentle "sigh". I sure would like to hear you read this one at Nan's, and bring some others as well if you would like to, after all most of you are poets! Beautiful this was. ~* Women have got to make the world safe for men since men have made it so darned unsafe for women *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Your comments are always a delight as are you. |
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