Open Poetry #19 |
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Appetites Met Daily |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Appetites Met daily My heart was left open With feelings exposed It is until further notice A sign will read closed Believed you were true I allowed you to enter Being all my own fault I am soft in the centre Easily bent and folded The soft heart my trait You having sensed this Words were your bait Throwing me your line You began the reeling I believed in promises Keeping true to feeling Hooked into my heart From out the cybersea Appetites are met daily It is there you fed me Hope ©2002 |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A heart wrenching tale Hope. But, stay true to your name and keep the hope that there are others in the world who are true and loving. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oh Hope, this is sooooooo heartwrenchingly beautiful, sweet friend, there will always be those we meet that do not sympathize with how we feel in the long run, but there will always be friends that will feed our needs and quench our thirst with promises always! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-21-2002 10:27 PM).] |
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Cameo Dreams New Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 9 |
The cyberworld is scary. Stay safe. I enjoyed your poem and hope things are better for you soon. |
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