Open Poetry #19 |
Soul Mate - my first love poem written, from years ago |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Soul Mate God created you out of the depths of my soul, out of the desires of my heart and, out of the purity of my tears. For, even before I breathed my first sigh of life, you were meant to be mine and, I yours, forevermore as two bodies of angels sharing one soul, a match made in heaven. By Melissa P. Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful it brought tears to my eyes to envision the girl I love and how she makes me feel this same way, this is absolutely breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) This wonderful romantic poem shows you have been a true romantic from the start always, I am a huge fan of your work just as we all love you so much! (smiles) May your soulmate forever bring magic to your heart, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-21-2002 10:54 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
How did this end up on the second page? It is beautiful and a first Poem? wow. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, It doesn't get much better than that. Excellent. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful Melissa..... Your soft romantic touch is all apparant there in your first write... I loved it... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, I remember you showing this to me a while back, you've presented it well in it's simple beauty |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Awwwww! I love these from you! You write so pretty Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
*bump* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you all for your replies! I've been in a lovely dovey mood all week and will continue to post love-themed poems Yes, this is the simplest soul mate poem that I have written thus far. Sometimes less is more and I don't think that I'll ever re-write this poem, as I am happy that it gets to the point well enough, considering this is the first love poem that I have ever written. Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
mel, don't change a thing with this! it's perfect and so beautiful. i can easily see your writing has always had a certain elegance and loveliness about it simplistic or otherwise. this is just wonderful poetry my friend! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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