Soul Mate - my first love poem written, from years ago

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:49 PM

Soul Mate

God created you
out of the depths of my soul,
out of the desires of my heart
and, out of the purity of my tears.
For, even before I breathed my first sigh of life,
you were meant to be mine
and, I yours, forevermore
as two bodies of angels
sharing one soul,
a match made in heaven.

By Melissa P. Monette

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-21 10:53 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful it brought tears to my eyes to envision the girl I love and how she makes me feel this same way, this is absolutely breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) This wonderful romantic poem shows you have been a true romantic from the start always, I am a huge fan of your work just as we all love you so much! (smiles) May your soulmate forever bring magic to your heart, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-21-2002 10:54 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-22 08:54 AM

How did this end up on the second page? It is beautiful and a first Poem? wow. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-22 09:08 AM

Melissa,
It doesn't get much better than that. Excellent.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2002-03-22 09:52 AM

Wonderful Melissa.....
Your soft romantic touch is all apparant there in your first write...

I loved it...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-03-22 12:29 PM

missy,

I remember you showing
this to me a while back,
you've presented it well
in it's simple beauty

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2002-03-22 06:55 PM

Melissa,

Awwwww! I love these from you! You write so pretty

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-03-22 08:27 PM

*bump*

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-03-22 08:40 PM

Thank you all for your replies!

I've been in a lovely dovey mood all week and will continue to post love-themed poems

Yes, this is the simplest soul mate poem that I have written thus far. Sometimes less is more and I don't think that I'll ever re-write this poem, as I am happy that it gets to the point well enough, considering this is the first love poem that I have ever written.

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

9 posted 2002-03-23 04:34 PM

mel,

don't change a thing with this! it's perfect and so beautiful. i can
easily see your writing has always had a certain elegance and
loveliness about it simplistic or otherwise. this is just wonderful
poetry my friend!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.