Open Poetry #19 |
Misplaced (twenty or less) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Misplaced (twenty or less) you say your heart is in the right place I just wonder where is the rest of you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
That's one powerful punch in few words...well expressed! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very very clever. one slick, good job. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is a short but emotionally packed poem, sweet friend, I hope now your heart is held by one whose heart and everything in him is in the right places and faithful to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hmmm. You sure know how to zero on the problem, LOL... Good writing, Helen! ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Helen, witty musing..made me chuckle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady< That is one slick poem. |
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