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INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2002-03-19 06:15 PM

June bug humming
Overhead, the darkness sparkling
An owl calls
No one can break my longing
November is so far away

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

1 posted 2002-03-19 06:29 PM

This is a lovely and fine tanka! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-19 08:25 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love junebugs so much, though it will be another two months before I see them aagin! (big huggsssss) This is a wonderful view of nature, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-19 08:51 PM

Wonderful..enjoyed this one very much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

4 posted 2002-03-20 01:09 PM

A beautiful and fluent expression, your poem. I'm not longing for November now, though...it's snowing and I want spring to get here...

I think I go home."
(Garbo)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-03-20 01:12 PM

INclan,
Interesting enjoyed the read.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

6 posted 2002-03-20 01:23 PM

A fine Tanka...thank you for sharing!

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2002-03-20 03:42 PM

INclan,
You have a gift for speaking volumes with few words. I too eagerly await the coming of the fall. It is good to see your poetry here again, I hope this means your heart has found its song. Keep writing,
Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2002-03-24 08:49 AM

INclan,

it's nice to see your writing again. living in a tropical country, i can't really relate to the sentiments of your musing..i hope to be in your dilemma someday though...

i hope you stay a while

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