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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-03-21 02:27 PM

The clouds whispered their
Goodnight, faded colors
Of dying reds and hues of gray
Gathered to kiss the sky
Mirrored in reflection
Over the stillness of the lake

Standing there in the meadow
A silhouette of gentle light,
The moon dances upward
To face the night alone
Proving that existence
Still roams freely, softly
Even in troubled times

I know my faith is upon the wind
I have hope for days gone by
I believe I am the stronger one,
Though still my heart does cry

I seek the freedom life can give,
And ask my soul be free
I offer a silent gift of hope
To place before you feet

Knowing

I am the mountain,
The rain, the stars
Beauty encompasses my soul
Still in the mist of our tangled mind

A faded dove flies
Humbly

Seeking
Peace

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 02:29 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-03-21 02:39 PM

Lauren,
And always peace is attainable. Awesome write. I love nature pictures applied to life. Well done poet friend.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-03-21 02:46 PM

fly on dove. . .fly on. . .

excellent Lauren. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-21 02:47 PM

The moon dances upward
To face the night alone
Proving that existence
Still roams freely, softly
Even in troubled times

I know my faith is upon the wind
I have hope for days gone by
I believe I am the stronger one,
Though still my heart does cry

I seek the freedom life can give,
And ask my soul be free
I offer a silent gift of hope
To place before you feet

Knowing

I am the mountain,
The rain, the stars
Beauty encompasses my soul
Still in the mist of our tangled mind

A faded dove flies
Humbly

Seeking
Peace
===================================

*smiling at you* and ... *sighing*

you will already know how this one touches me and why....but I always need a reminder of whats left to do.
exquisitely Lauren poetry... and another for my butterfly library.
TY

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (03-21-2002 02:48 PM).]

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

4 posted 2002-03-21 03:37 PM

This poem was so beautiful. I really enjoyed it!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

5 posted 2002-03-21 04:23 PM

very very pretty, as i have come to expect from you. bravo!
-Dave

"FIAT LUX!"
-God

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-03-21 05:49 PM

Greeneyes,
Well done, some wonderful lines.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-03-21 05:51 PM

"I know my faith is upon the wind
I have hope for days gone by
I believe I am the stronger one,
Though still my heart does cry"

Oh do I ever love these lines, and all the others. beautiful work here Lauren, I truly enjoyed reading this. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-21 07:06 PM

Lauren, this warmly touching poem is very,
very nice....Thank You for sharing it with
us.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-21 07:21 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever fly for peace and find all the joy your heart deserves! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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