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My heart.....My Mind.......
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My heart.....My Mind....... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 All the while I’ve loved you and I love you still my mind just can’t understand ~ my heart always will It simply isn’t logical this emotional revere but my heart can’t separate today from used to be My mind finds no clever answer no way of comprehending why why I still love you long past your good~bye For my heart there is no reason no explanation for rhyme only this love for you beyond the bounds of time ~SEA~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yay, I'm the 1st to reply your poem!! I can really relate to it, especially the part "It simply isn’t logical this emotional revere but my heart can’t separate today from used to be" It just says soo much susan, I like it a lot! Back up to the top it goes! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl Do you know how good this really is? Not just the form although that is excellent. I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. YOU are indeed a master of art here. The whole of this is exquisite, and do I remember this feeling, the longing to return to back then, even though you know you can’t, and in your saner moments wouldn’t. Perfectly penned darling girl absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...perfect!! Love the pic as well. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sea how beautiful, the heart the mind, oh this is truly a nice write, and love the picture too, floria Floria |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
This was quite beautiful I must say |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this... quote: yesterday is just tomorrow gone whispering... yes, I like this very much... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the heart and the mind. . . do they walk disinctly, or together. . . only they know. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, you know I love this! I still love my first love and can't understand how that's possible after all these years. Love is a very fascinating emotion.  (((hugs))) me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Oooohhhhhhhh...your gorgeous words always touch both our hearts and minds, sweet freind, I hope that true love will always do the same for you and fill you with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, with each day, week and month...you get better...no question about it! Excellent..enjoyed this |
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