Open Poetry #19 |
Really? |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spring snuck silently, lingering longer, lenient, finding favor fey with winter’s ways wantonly scrambling, screaming, Surrender! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
cool!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*insert white flag here* well. . . when I look out the window it's white. . . does that count?? wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Cool...yep, Spring has ol man winter on the run, but I think he pulled out both barrells today! It is pretty chilly here! *LOL* I hope he surrenders soon! Brrrrrrrrr... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...spring is Sunshine!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done sunshine..its 26 here today brrrrr..was in seventies last week.. ~Victoria~
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul, this is so creative I love it, TRULY this is one of your utter utter best. You know I love this don’t you? Good it’s beautiful it really is excellent Absolutely first class writing darling heart go to the head of the class Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Oh YES! Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine~ Welcoming spring.... enchanting words here.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 04:50 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Lovely write. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This shines like you! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Now I like this, very unique,,floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Wow, I just love the various alliteration you use in each line, sweet friend, this is an absolutely gorgeous transition poem from winter to spring! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are sunshine to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I like what happens when you play with words~ Really ? ... yes, really~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks everyone! We had 70's last week...10 last night...yikes! It's not NICE to fool with Mother Nature.... |
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