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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-03-21 01:30 PM



Spring snuck silently,
lingering longer, lenient,
finding favor fey
with winter’s ways wantonly
scrambling, screaming, Surrender!

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2002-03-21 01:41 PM


cool!!
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2 posted 2002-03-21 02:49 PM


*insert white flag here*  

well. . . when I look out the window it's white. . . does that count??  

wonderful. . .

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3 posted 2002-03-21 03:12 PM


Cool...yep, Spring has ol man winter on the run, but I think he pulled out both barrells today! It is pretty chilly here! *LOL* I hope he surrenders soon! Brrrrrrrrr...
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4 posted 2002-03-21 03:15 PM


Karilea...spring is Sunshine!!
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5 posted 2002-03-21 03:24 PM


nicely done sunshine..its 26 here today brrrrr..was in seventies last week..

              ~Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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6 posted 2002-03-21 03:52 PM


Kari darling sister of my soul, this is so creative I love it, TRULY this is one of your utter utter best. You know I love this don’t you? Good it’s beautiful it really is excellent

Absolutely first class writing darling heart go to the head of the class


Love and warm stuff
As always
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To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-03-21 04:34 PM


Oh YES!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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8 posted 2002-03-21 04:50 PM


Sunshine~

Welcoming spring.... enchanting words here....


Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 04:50 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-03-21 05:42 PM


Sunshine,
Lovely write.

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10 posted 2002-03-21 05:52 PM


This shines like you!
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11 posted 2002-03-21 05:54 PM


Now I like this, very unique,,floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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12 posted 2002-03-21 09:13 PM




YAY!!! Wow, I just love the various alliteration you use in each line, sweet friend, this is an absolutely gorgeous transition poem from winter to spring! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are sunshine to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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13 posted 2002-03-21 11:22 PM


Karilea~
I like what happens when you play with words~
Really ? ... yes, really~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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14 posted 2002-03-22 06:50 AM



Thanks everyone! We had 70's last week...10 last night...yikes!  It's not NICE to fool with Mother Nature....

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