Breathless (more ramblings....)

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-03-21 08:58 AM

When our hearts are together
looking out over the horizons
of tomorrow,
a certain kind of peace
fills my soul~

The tick tock of time
stands still
as I am held in your embrace,
together we stand
upon the shores of the future~

Each drop of golden sunlight
seems that much brighter,
every sip
from the cup of life
tastes vintage~

We dance
in sunsets glow,
placing our dreams
in the hands
of destiny~

Like an angel
sent from heaven
you warm a spirit
that had seemingly had
forgotten how to fly~

Oceans of blue
can not compare
to the depths
of your eyes
when you gaze
into my heart~

Each touch
a cherished moment
that can not slip away
with the passing of time~

To simply hear
you whisper my name~
to be held in your love~

Each moment spent with you
leaves me
~breathless~

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-21-2002 09:53 AM).]

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

1 posted 2002-03-21 09:59 AM

Donna Hi there this is such an exquisite piece of writing, the whole poem is filled with such a touch of love. it flows along the lines like a ship over the sea. Very beautiful I like this a whole lot. May I keep it?

You don’t mind going into my library do you?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-03-21 10:38 AM

Seems like a very beautiful romance. And a flowing and lovely description of it.
Sandra

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-03-21 12:59 PM

The last stanza was especially nice. Good one.

Nan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-21 01:07 PM

Gentle Spirit,
I like the way you ramble, enjoyed.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-21 01:07 PM

Ah Donna! You ramble beautifully girl!
Love this I do! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-03-21 01:53 PM

What beautiful words throughout and it left me feeling like love is everywhere. I tried to pick out a favorite line or two, but they all just sang of romance.

'together we stand
upon the shores of the future~'...

Wow! Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-03-21 03:31 PM

I applaud you....this is OUTSTANDING ~D~I keep this!!!

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 03:31 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-21 09:17 PM

"We dance
in sunsets glow,
placing our dreams
in the hands
of destiny~

Like an angel
sent from heaven
you warm a spirit
that had seemingly had
forgotten how to fly~"

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is such a breathtakingly romantic ramble, sweet friend, may you forever embrace each new sunrise with true happiness and always share breathless happiness together everyday! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

9 posted 2002-03-21 09:37 PM

i good to ramblbe sometimes out deepest comes out then.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2002-03-21 10:21 PM

Oh, how I covet those precious moments...beautifully done D! Enjoyed this very much!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2002-03-21 10:36 PM

And I am left breathless reading this beauty.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-03-22 12:25 PM

Oceans of blue
can not compare
to the depths
of your eyes
when you gaze
into my heart~

Each touch
a cherished moment
that can not slip away
with the passing of time~

To simply hear
you whisper my name~
to be held in your love~

Each moment spent with you
leaves me
~breathless~
============================

you got it bad girlie...and its soooooo goooood for inspiration

your rambles are beautiful!!!
keep em coming.

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

13 posted 2002-03-22 12:39 PM

"Each touch
a cherished moment
that can not slip away
with the passing of time"

That was wonderful. So sweet. So true.

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

14 posted 2002-03-22 03:08 PM

beautiful and soft in intend. Enjoyed.

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

15 posted 2002-03-26 11:15 AM

Standing Ovation

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