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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-21 04:10 AM



Close At Hand

come to me
and we shall drink
from the same cup
you say you feel
so empty then let me
fill you up
a moon light song
shimmers on the surface
of the sea
I have saved
all my dances
so you alone
can dance with me
miles of beach
started with a tiny
grain of sand
and the dances
that you dream
at night are as
close as a hand

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-21 06:08 AM


Tender and romantic...very beauitifully done!
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2 posted 2002-03-21 07:20 AM


What a sweet thought.

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-03-21 10:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always dance with your love on the beach and forever may he save the last dance for your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is tender and romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-21 10:25 PM


This is very sweet!

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5 posted 2002-03-23 07:01 AM


Bravo,
Number 1 on my dance card.
Very nice write Helen

Bernie


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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-03-26 09:38 AM


Do you have room on your dance card for one more admirer?
Well done, inded

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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