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0 posted 2002-03-21 02:53 AM


Welcome To My Soul
Come in, sit and mull.
Kick back and rest the bones,
hear with me the world's moans.

Tell me... why are you hear?
Out in the back - the keg of beer?
What are you looking to find?
Here, you and I, in my mind.

It's complicated in the maze,
in me passion's ablaze.
If you must, wear a fire suit...
Hopefully I'll set you on - the point moot.

Shelf after shelf of ideas,
ideas, images, and mama mias.
Good 'n evil rest in the beds,
my battle against evil often in my sheds.

Up on the mantle a portrait of Christ.
And now and then a longing for a tryst.
Both ends of the pendulum,
in this, my condiminium.

Eyes toward the future;
for me, at times, it can be a blur.
Over there my control center
in the files memories of a winter.

Love has rested in the den,
like a tiger in a too small pen.
Regret has passed through,
it does though nothing only making blue.

In here anger rarely lurks.
After all, with it, you end up like the jerks.
Day by day, and night by night,
trying to find my way around here by passion's light.

Walk around and please do browse,
Find out about me - see why I choose what I choose.
For me, for you, there is nothing to loose.
Here, in my mind's eye, my soul's house.

Welcome To My Soul
Come in, sit and mull.
Kick back and rest the bones,
hear with me the world's moans.

3 -20- 02


© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-21 03:33 AM


"It's complicated in the maze,
in me passion's ablaze.
If you must, wear a fire suit..."

I like this part..... very well said....
how I feel lately too

[This message has been edited by SEA (03-21-2002 03:33 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-03-21 10:05 AM


YOU GO TI!!!! Awesome poem sweety..it ROCKED!!!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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3 posted 2002-03-21 12:14 PM


Thank you for sharing another one of you amazing poems, I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

I give huggles for replies :)

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4 posted 2002-03-21 12:19 PM


"Love has rested in the den,
like a tiger in a too small pen.
Regret has passed through,
it does though nothing only making blue".

This part was my favorite. ((big heart hugs))I always enjoy your poetry, my friend

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5 posted 2002-03-21 03:15 PM


WOW TITUS....

I believe you wrote this...Its awesome...was an awesome read too!  

I'll talk to you more online...

Once again...AWESOME

~Lisa

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6 posted 2002-03-21 03:20 PM


Hummmm...well, I didn't see any mention of a nice cup of coffee or tea there!

Seriously though, this is an excellent piece of writing...a keeper!

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7 posted 2002-03-21 09:36 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, your wonderful heart always has so much love and wisdom to share with us all! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are always welcome to pay a visit to all our hearts too! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-22 07:05 PM




Thank you everyone! So very much!

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
         ~ The Night Owl

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