Open Poetry #19 |
Winter On Lake Pend Orielle |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Frigid wind skips white-whipped over impossibly rich key-lime waves on Lake Pend Orielle’s north curve. Winter holds a frozen moat around the land a thousand feet out from the shore, in a shining gray steel embrace. Curling round the moat’s edges, on the waterline, a ragged, crusted ridge of ice, each lap of waves freezing it fresh white Here hungry wild geese stand sharply peering, perched to plunge in for a fish between the bobbing shards of ice set free by a temporary thaw, and between the hundreds of protruding feet and tail feathers of their busily searching fellow mates. They always seem to know where the fishing is fine. * * * * (C)2002 Rosemary J. Gwaltney [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (03-21-2002 11:59 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Rosemary, Nice poem and presentation. Hey I was born not too far from there! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now aren't you clever what a beautiful presentation visually and poetically. I kept this one, as also the images in my mind were pretty darn wonderful! I love how the water does that making it so clean and white with each new spash! The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Rosemary...I'm a bit late with the Welcome Back Home....but I saw in these little fishing bobbles a great memory, and thank you for that! It is good to see you and lucky again...where have the two of you been keeping yourselves? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary Your words capture better than a photograph. Beautiful thawing on this first day of spring. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is such a gorgeous vision of nature, sweet friend, I want to see this place someday, it must be such a gorgeous vision to see all those geese on the waters! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosemary, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Vivid images, I could just see all those feathers flying..diving for a meal...very nicely done! *S* |
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