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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

0 posted 2002-03-19 09:08 PM

So Much Skin a Song

There is so much skin
that holds the fluid parts
within the whisper of internal seam
sometimes a scream
a sigh and whispered question why
do not cascade in waterfall to clarity
upon the sun baked pond
so deep so deep the troubles my heart keeps
yet sweet with bliss stained lullaby

There is so much skin
That holds the bones of old
Within the cry of breaking dream
Sometimes it seems
An echo bounced on answers sly
Does not repeat in current of eternity
Upon fabric printed time
So long so long the memories remained
Yet sweet and bliss stained lullaby

There is so much song
That begs in mind be taught
along with croon a feeling
danger fraught
that sweet anticipation's swept
within this pale peach of skin
to sink to sink with whim of open gown
the fabric catch of dream
in lover's song
_____

with thanks to River, for running through

[This message has been edited by Martie (03-19-2002 09:29 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-19 09:14 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I know this lovely feeling ever so well, sweet friend, I too anticipate to be touched by the beauty of true love with the girl of my dreams and feel the song of her heart to mine! (kiss on cheek) You always weave such beautiful songs of romance, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-03-19 09:16 PM

There is so much song
That begs in mind be taught
along with croon a feeling
danger fraught
that sweet anticipation's swept
within this pale peach of skin
to sink to sink with
whim of open gown
the fabric catch of dream in lover's song

Absolutely lovely, Martie....just lovely!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-19 09:19 PM

Ah Martie...thanks for leaving this song tonight...I literally have goosebumps...and you to thank for it...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-03-19 09:26 PM

MartieSis~
You are singing some mighty purty songs of late ...

'so deep so deep the troubles my heart keeps
yet sweet with bliss stained lullaby'

Oh my ... just perfectly beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-19 09:40 PM

So lovely and lyrical Martie...
Enjoyed the magic your writing creates tonight.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2002-03-19 10:47 PM

~I am filled. Right up. I could read and read this, and I will. I love your title, and I cannot choose a line or three, just them all, this is incredible. Yeah,...gosh, thank you for sharing what you write Martie. *Peace.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-03-20 12:32 PM

There is so much skin
that holds the fluid parts
within the whisper of internal seam
sometimes a scream
a sigh and whispered question why
do not cascade in waterfall to clarity
upon the sun baked pond
so deep so deep the troubles my heart keeps
yet sweet with bliss stained lullaby

There is so much skin
That holds the bones of old
Within the cry of breaking dream
Sometimes it seems
An echo bounced on answers sly
Does not repeat in current of eternity
Upon fabric printed time
=================================

I dont know whats in that river...but send me vials of it PLEASE...
this is DEEP!! (no pun)
and this is exquisite...and I am so loving the subtle rhyme flow of this.
Beautiful thoughts!!

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-03-20 09:41 AM

always a pleasure to read your words...
this one I enjoy on several levels...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-03-20 10:20 AM

Martie, awesome work.
"So long so long the memories remained
Yet sweet and bliss stained lullaby"
So enjoyable to read this. so lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-03-20 10:40 AM

enjoyed

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-03-21 10:35 PM

Martie-
I really have to get busy and start reading more.
You're reminding me of what I've been missing.
This is absolutely beautiful, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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