Open Poetry #19 |
New Day |
AJ Keating Junior Member
since 2001-05-10
Posts 26New Hampshire |
New Day I stare into the evening, Searching for a memory. One glance at the crystal water And all my thoughts come back to me. Thoughts of past and long ago, Just the same cliche, But the drawing of the card Signals the new day. People come and people go, But one thing stays the same, The overwhelming need For players in the game. When your bishops, queen and knights Have long since gone away, The time has come to Welcome the new day. Welcome her with open arms And let her guide you through She's the only one around Forever looking out for you. Life and love is just a game I know you've heard it said, The time will surely come When this game will end. And all that you can do Is to Pick up your head and say: "I am ready to Welcome in the new day." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I have missed you and your marvelous words soooooo much, it is a pleasure to see you again! (smiles) Love is indeed a game, but as long as we have faith in ourselves and look up to each brand new day with a smile, the experience will awlays be rewarding! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Adam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I liked this one. Especially: People come and people go, But one thing stays the same, The overwhelming need For players in the game. Great images and the flow is terrific. Nan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Bout time you showed up again AJ...we were starting to pout for missing you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I like this....sure do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Warm words to give smile to wisdom...exceptionally well done. ThisDiamond |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
AJ Keating...This is very beautiful and holds a wonderful message for all to learn from and hold in their hearts. ***Ivy Rose |
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