Open Poetry #19 |
Dream |
trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
In silent night I silently dreamed That I could see for miles around Amidst a garden Full of clouds I could barely see the ground Above the mountains But below the sky I await the silent dawn I sit and stare Then begin to smile As then I start to yawn Sleepily I lay Amongst the clouds That are floating up in the sky I twist and turn At my fading visions My dream begins to die Again I awake Amongst the clouds To the sounds of noisy grunts To my alarm I'm standing on The shoulders of giants Better to die, and sleep |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Hey just remeber this, you didn't get up on those giant's shoulders without by just dreaming. But remember the greatest things in the world started with a dream. There's a peace inside us all |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! This is a wonderfully heartfelt verse, dearest friend, I too believe we all have dreams and they are what motivate us and without dreams, we never have the drive in doing something and we don't have something we can look forward to. (sigh) Always believe in your dreams, for they will be the cornerstones of your life that fill you with happiness! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Trevor, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey you...where you been? This is great...Ive missed you |
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