navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Dream
Open Poetry #19
Post A Reply Post New Topic Dream Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
trevorskogsbergh
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

0 posted 2002-03-20 03:46 AM


In silent night
I silently dreamed
That I could see for miles around

Amidst a garden
Full of clouds
I could barely see the ground

Above the mountains
But below the sky
I await the silent dawn

I sit and stare
Then begin to smile
As then I start to yawn

Sleepily I lay
Amongst the clouds
That are floating up in the sky

I twist and turn
At my fading visions
My dream begins to die

Again I awake
Amongst the clouds
To the sounds of noisy grunts

To my alarm
I'm standing on
The shoulders of giants

Better to die, and sleep
The never-waking sleep, than linger on
And dare to live when the souls life is gone.


© Copyright 2002 Trevor Skogsbergh - All Rights Reserved
baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-03-20 05:44 AM


Hey just remeber this, you didn't get up on those giant's shoulders without by just dreaming.  But remember the greatest things in the world started with a dream.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-03-20 09:00 AM




BRAVO!!! This is a wonderfully heartfelt verse, dearest friend, I too believe we all have dreams and they are what motivate us and without dreams, we never have the drive in doing something and we don't have something we can look forward to. (sigh) Always believe in your dreams, for they will be the cornerstones of your life that fill you with happiness! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Trevor, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2002-03-20 10:23 PM


Hey you...where you been? This is great...Ive missed you
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Dream

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary