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My Used By Date
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My Used By Date |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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My Used By Date Was there when needed Because he desired My used by date Must have expired Me steadfast and true I’m being neglected Your heart of stone I never suspected When not being there Unlike used to be Suddenly I realised You were using me Its more of frustration Somewhat confused Mind being taken Heart being used With my smile fading My heart upended Wish I knew why You had pretended Have you conscience Awake and aware Looking inwardly Is anybody there ?? Hope ©2002 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, Well done sad subject. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes you just don't want to know. I liked your poem. Nan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Hope, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to all who are cheated this way and neglected from love! (kiss on cheek) This is a very sad truth that so many face and I pray that all will find what their hearts truly deserve! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is emotionally powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever, I never would have thought of that. I relate to this one all too well. I guess, as one fine poet here once said, "people run out of freshness" |
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