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Espaliered Exposure
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Awake and shivering I knew it was over exposure. Tendrils of that dream Must have wedged opened a window Letting the frigid veins of air Freeze exposed places in my heart. The dream itself was warm enough. Its sensual windings Climbed the heights of my resolve As it crept over walls built eons ago In efforts to keep hordes of feelings From overwhelming. Vining itself into chinks of sealed chambers The icy fingers of now found ways to Touch places not meant for exposure. And I am left shaking Trying to find warmth Overexposed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
chill heat with icy finger wamth enjoyed the reflections |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa! I loved it, Ron.  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heck with the whoa...More, Please! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes please...I want more! ~Hugs, Nancy! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cpt hair darling boy OH MY this is so amazing, a simply stunning example of form. You really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills Always your work is a delight, this is awesome yes please more more more   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thrilling!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! I LOVE THIS TOO, MORE, MORE!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always expose so much meaning and beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ The idea of a dream-thought symetrically spread against a wall is a uniquely-turned avenue of poetry~ I greatly enjoyed the use of word-imagery to convey those feelings~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Perhaps it is my overworked imagination [can imagination be overworked? I must think on that...] but somehow I saw this written for Sleeping Beauty...just to let her know how difficult it was to get to her for the awakening...never mind me...my mind is fanciful this afternoon... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Sometimes in dreams we are left open, like innocence. I liked this honest reflection into feeling from you. |
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