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Open Poetry #19

Not Good Enough

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-17 03:54 AM

Hi, I just got back from celebrating St. Patty's day downtown and cant sleep so I thought I was roam around..and write this poem, it makes no sense so..it's cos I'm still a lil drunk:P

I stare down at my hands
In a drunken state of mind
Biding my precious unfilling hours
With thoughts
Meandering through
This paper cup of time
Dripping with tears
Burning a hole
Right through the very essence of my drunken state of mind
Where is he
The one
That calls himself my friend
My eyes grow tired
My heart grows bloody red
Disappointment lurking
Within the shadows
Tell me
Whisper to my aching heart
Am I not good enough
To be considered as a friend?

See me?
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

1 posted 2002-03-17 09:50 AM

this is really good, and you were drunk when you wrote it nice one. Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2002-03-20 02:15 PM

I have been in that drunken state of mind, and heart. Can't tell if it's better that way or sober...hmmm.

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