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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-03-20 10:46 AM

Do not hold these words
too tightly
for they may crumble
and in dried petal fall
litter woven carpets
with fragments
of how I feel.

Cradle gently
the essence of each

laying them softly between
the now and then
that I might be
preserved for yet
another season

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-03-20 10:54 AM

Ron..for a poet, words are feelings and fragile. I have walked gently through yours. I do like the way you write!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-03-20 10:54 AM

Delicately spoken, Captain, loved this...

~Tier

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-03-20 11:10 AM

Thank you for such a wonderful read, you words seem so delicate and fragile, thank you for sharing.

Andrew

I give huggles for replies :)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-20 11:12 AM

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my feelings quite well....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-03-20 02:13 PM

Do not hold these words
too tightly
for they may crumble
and in dried petal fall
==============================
laying them softly between
the now and then
===========================

so I will press them between the memories and dreams and place them in the now of my library for later pleasure for then.

love this one poet sir.

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-03-20 06:05 PM

litter woven carpets
with fragments
of how I feel

Classic you...applause!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-20 07:20 PM

I sprinkle those words like rose petals
covering my sheets, to lay and dream each night upon soft thoughts

M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-20 07:44 PM

Ron, I danced softly, down, around and inbetween your words...ever so carefully and gently. For I enjoyed them too much to crush them. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-20 07:47 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderfully sentimental, sweet friend, your wonderful words always blossom with such beauty and heart! (big hugggssssss) Your words are freshly preserved with inspiration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2002-03-20 08:47 PM

Ron, this is wonderful. I have to preserve it.
Sandra

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