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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-19 09:18 PM

Sounds of Cusp

Time splinters between
winter to spring
held ever fragile
as if a shard of light
might
brighten
this fog which cushions
yesterday from tomorrow

and Scarlett streaks
against blue skies

as sun’s gold greets
summer’s green

in all things primary
ego disappears

as a lover’s finger traces
blue veins
of his sweetheart’s wrist

come back…

I am not finished with
loving you

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-19 09:26 PM

(smiles) Such soft serenity and beauty fills these words, sweet friend, I too know how these feeling relates to the seasons too, for it has continued to snow here so very much lately while the next day temperatures can get as high as 75 degrees in an instant and it feels almost like early summer! (giggles) These are very lovely visions, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-03-19 09:35 PM

SweetKarileaPoetess~
You get one great big *sigh* for this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-19 09:44 PM

as a lover’s finger traces
blue veins
of his sweetheart’s wrist

come back…

I am not finished with
loving you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh yes! I don't want to be gushing all over the page, as I would have a hard time finding the words to tell you how this made me feel, so I will just say, 'thank you' for this gem tonight Karilea! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-03-19 10:07 PM

Time splinters between
winter to spring
held ever fragile
as if a shard of light
might
brighten
this fog which cushions
yesterday from tomorrow

A perfect description of this time of year, Karilea...
A beautiful poem...I loved it

hugggssss!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-03-20 08:06 AM

Time splinters between
winter to spring
held ever fragile
as if a shard of light
might
brighten
this fog which cushions
yesterday from tomorrow

Beautiful verse.... one of thoe things I can look at and say " wish I had written this"

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-03-20 09:45 AM

as a lover's finger traces
blue veins
of his sweetheart's wrist

come back

I am not finished with
loving you
================================

*SIGH*

(keeper)

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-03-20 09:46 AM

like a gourmet sample
never finished
in the mind

loveing you

lovely words

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-03-20 06:22 PM

and the cusp remains. . . to be filled again. . .

your mind is searching isn't it my friend??? it shows here. . . you know that I love when you search. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-03-20 06:47 PM

Sunshine~

Oh wow, now this is a love defined....such beauty in your words....and how gently you place them before our eyes....

HUGSSS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-20-2002 06:47 PM).]

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

10 posted 2002-03-20 06:51 PM

hmmmmmm.
yummy.
-Dave

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-03-20 07:18 PM

Oh now that is what I call a celebration of Spring!

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-03-20 07:27 PM

darn...*s how I love this:
in all things primary
ego disappears

as a lover’s finger traces
blue veins
of his sweetheart’s wrist

come back…

I am not finished with
loving you
*ssss
M

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-03-20 07:31 PM

Karilea

That last line is like the first sweet peas of spring...just beautiful, the whole poem!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-03-20 08:04 PM

This KJ,.....is an awesome poem....and I do
very much like the ending....B.

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

15 posted 2002-03-20 08:14 PM

You do have a way with words, my friend. This is beautiful. Did I tell you that KJ Chardonnay is one of my favorites? It goes well with this poem.

Shenachie

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