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My allure
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My allure |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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My allure I'm wishing, you're fishing where I am swimming 'round In your sea, look for me around thick reeds of ground Near deep channels of water, no sun, only shade My hiding place, hidden where sweet mermaids are made. So come, darling cast into big bosoms of reeds Drop your lure in my ocean; God sends it to me Sing your song of sweet echoes, as I listen for Your sweet trill of mystery, you are my allure. My allure. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs March 20, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, mermaids are my favorite magical creature of all, I have fallen in love with them ever since I was a little boy and still love them so uch today! (smiles) We all love you so much,s weet friend, this is soooooo magically alluring! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly utterly amazing. You’ve picked up the melody within and spun it into a river of dream. A fluid confection of delight. YOU do know I love this don’t you? I thought you’d probably pick up the subtle and delicate nuances of my rapture. I can never do subtle anyway I’m stunned into silence this is soooooooo brilliant, this really IS writing pas excellence   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Something made me read this, and now I know why I did. Simply beautiful! I don't have the words for this one. I love it though! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Marsha, darling girl. You know that your words of praise are sweet honey to my soul. I am raptured by your delightful comments. You and your poetry will always be dear to my heart. God bless you, sweet Mushy ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Saunni, for your kind words. ((Sauni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-20-2002 09:08 PM).] |
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