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Open Poetry #19

Poetic Hearts - Tanka

Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-03-19 11:30 PM

Poetic Hearts
Tanka

When two hearts entwine
'tis the bond of poem fine
your thoughts sail with mine
in magic of verse and rhyme
cherished by soul for all time

By Melissa P. Monette

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

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1 posted 2002-03-19 11:32 PM

ooooh this is gorgeous! Love at its finest.
(hugs)

Balladeer

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2 posted 2002-03-19 11:42 PM

LOL! Love it, patootie gal...and those hearts are awesome!!

Mistletoe Angel

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3 posted 2002-03-20 08:11 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always melt these pages with your words of loves magic! (kiss on cheek) May your heart forever embrace your loves in the symphony of life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-03-20 09:49 AM

Nice work, Melissa. And a very cute picture to go with.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-03-20 10:15 AM

lovely words and thought, Melissa

*s
M

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

6 posted 2002-03-20 10:48 AM

enjoyed

Auguste

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By the sea

7 posted 2002-03-20 03:00 PM

This is pretty, Melissa. I like pretty!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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