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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
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0 posted 2002-03-19 10:23 AM

It lifted, just a bit
and she raised her hands to clap
unexpectedly elated.
in a daze, she watched it go higher
and higher.

Oh my God, she screamed,
it is untied!
She leaped, just in time
to catch it and safely
tether it
back to the ground.
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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-03-19 10:38 AM

Hope... expectations..or simply a childs toy, take your pick...

nice...made me think.
Decaflame
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2 posted 2002-03-19 10:40 AM


thoughts will do that...
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-19 11:07 AM

This is a very cool write!
jellybeans
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4 posted 2002-03-20 02:44 PM

thank you, was toying with a dream, wondering if to try to make it real, hold onto it, or just let it fly away, this is what came out
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