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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-14 08:54 PM

How I will be able repay
for all you give, for all you say?
The gold of the world cannot be
enough to give, to you from me.

Words, costing only time to tell
of how I feel, now very swell.
Wishes, for a penny in fount
costing little, such small amount

I wish for the word to once say
how much I would give, and then pay
I cannot express deeply enough
of what you give, all the right stuff.

I could write till the well runs dry
and cry a tear, sound a sad sigh.
I could whisper, softly covey
I wipe each of your tears away.

I cannot give more than the gold
within this heart, where you I hold.
I fail to write strong feelings felt
from the cards that a true love’s dealt

I will simply go our loving way
as I kiss you, whispering say
that I will love you till cannot
for that is what this gold has bought!

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-14-2002 09:03 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-14 08:59 PM

(smiles) And your loving heart is a huge well with love and inspiration that will never be fully fathomed, sweet friend, you have a golden heart that always has so much love to give! (big hugggsssss) May you and your love forever be embraced in the magic of this golden gift, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-14 09:00 PM

Give back to her
what she gives
a life for life
and let love live...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-03-14 10:33 PM

*sigh* a heart filled with romance is what you offer, dear friend...she cannot help but feel the touch of your golden gift to her as well....*sigh* so good to read your romantic words again...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-14 10:42 PM

I will simply go our loving way
as I kiss you, whispering say
that I will love you till cannot
for that is what this gold has bought!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ooooh..*SIGH* Barry! We're back to the romantic stuff and you KNOW what that does to me!!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2002-03-15 12:09 PM

Barry,

Awwwww.. again, this is so sweet

I really enjoyed and can easily relate

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-03-19 10:19 PM

Magnus~

'I cannot give more than the gold
within this heart, where you I hold.'

What lovely phrasing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-03-20 01:50 PM

Magnus...Eloquent and beautiful statement of an undying love for another. Beautiful in a softly, mellow way. ***Ivy Rose

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-03-20 03:36 PM

Truly nice Magnus, you have said a lot to her in this one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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