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A letter on how much you suck
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A letter on how much you suck |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
You suck I want you to know that Really though How long did you think I would not notice I cannot believe how long I went though And now you wonder why I am mad Seriously what did you expect You were leading me on Now you try to tell me that you screwed up That you would have hurt me That is the most retarded thing I have ever heard Everyone else saw it Everyone one else seems as dumbfounded as me Oh by the way You did hurt me Are you that stupid I tried … I really tried It’s really nice to know how much time I wasted on you But you do not care one bit It’s all about you I guess the saying is true Nice guys get walked on Now, on top of everything you want me stay to be nice No I don’t think so Never Oh Just incase I forgot to tell you before You suck I really want you to know that There's a peace inside us all |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Jason, Sometimes, as you say, you have to reach really deep to find that peace that is inside us all. Keep reaching. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
that's some kinda ranting!!!! wow!!!! you express your feelings well.... the pain, the anger, and let me just say that i think this is a very healthy way to write.... i know it hurts, but..... sometimes what needs to be done is just to tell someone off when they screwed with your heart and you did it well!!!! nice job! |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thx larry I try to keep that in mind every day. I try to live by that verse everyday of my life. I hold it dear to my heart and honestly tell myself it everyday. Without it i think i would go mad sometimes. thx to you as well doreen, this poem was kind of a venting of emotions that i put down on paper and was like hey why don't i post this. I really needed to do it. I am glad you liked it. There's a peace inside us all |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh come on bae...dont hold back... Spit it out my good man...say what you really feel!!  *L*HEY YOU  always a treat to see an old friend from the early days come thru.Well I think this one will get the message across quite well...and aint it great we can yell with our pens? dont stay way so long next time..Ok later-bae-gator jm Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice expression of your feelings...James |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Janet as always your replies are well received. I tried not to hold back but if i didn't they would have censored me. Trust me what i would have like to say was not what we are allowed to post. ;-) James i am glad you liked it. thx for taking the time to read it. There's a peace inside us all |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh wow. I am thinking of someone RIGHT NOW as I read this.  Yep. He sucks. Nice job... and I promise, it gets better. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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