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Moon In Sliver
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Moon In Sliver |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Moon In Sliver ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Silent is the moon in sliver Promising love, to deliver Just a shine of heart-thoughts too tiny to discern ..... each new heart in aching, sings a special song Chorus of remember in delicate recall Light of moon in sliver - brings heart of purest light ..... shining, shining thusly into the night, she beckons in a petticoat of a million stars dance 'cross the Milky Way in silent glow of moon Sliver me~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bravo! A glittering performance! ThisDiamond |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl OH MY FUR AND WHISKERS!! This is the most gorgeous and sparkling delight I have ever seen, this must have taken ages. But it’s worth every single second. Truly you KNOW how I love glitter, and this is superb darling heart simply stunningly beautiful. What can I say you’ve shared such a pure and incandescent glow with me, I love it love it love it. Definitely a keeper, and Ooooohhhhhh and ahhhhhhhh just as I would on November 5 when fireworks light the sky, this shall light my night. Exceptional darling heart utterly exceptional    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Marge...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Thank you so very much~ MarshaLove~ LOL @ 'must have taken ages.' Tee-Hee ... 8 minutes ... start to finishing glow~  WELL ... couldn't let your little heart outshine me .. Now COULD I ? Love you gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You know how I love a slivered moon!! Hugs! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You always make me feel like I want to  you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, and the moon was slivered just so last 'eve, for I saw this and went outside just to look to see...and there were the stars, and the moon, all waiting for Sun.... it was so delightful, I forgot to come back in and tell you what a wonderful job you did! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"Silver Me". How perfect an ending for a sparkling poem. Sandra |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Marge, very lovely presentation! Enjoyed this gem. Cheryl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Tee-Hee .... I kinda figured that out~  Seymour~ Well darlin' ... bring it on~  Karilea~ Yep ... too my pup out ... saw that sliver and just HAD TO WRITE IT~  CatalinaMoon~ Thank you gal ... *hugs*-to-go~ HisPoet/Cheryl~ I'm really pleased to know you enjoyed it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I love the way you shine and light up my life. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Oh, what a lovely thing to say~ I thank YOU for letting me know you enjoyed it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt, oh yes mum was right this is a real beauty. You KNOW how she is about glitter and I’m the same about the night sky, there’s nothing I love more than the moon and stars. This really is spectacular, one day I’ll try to do something as creative as this, but not yet, and it won't be this special but then it couldn't be   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...Beautiful beyond words. Radiant with the silvered light of the Slivered Moon. ***Ivy Rose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You've gotta know I love this.  There is still no one who writes the moon like you do. Love it! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is a beautiful sparkling poem. I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ LOL@ your Mom in her glitter~ I'll be waiting for that 'creativity' gal~ Meanwhile ... your poetry is aglow~ IvyRose~ Awwww, thank you so much gal~ VICKY ! ! My little buddy ... *HUGS* You know I love ya'gal~ Come on down ! SmartChick~ I'm so glad you got to see it my friend~ Thank you so much~ Love n' *hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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