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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:15 AM



The Blending of Colors…

Paint me…
like a canvas of fine linen
trace my lips
with the gentle brush of your tongue

follow the line of my neck
to discover the rise and fall
of my breast as my breath
becomes heavy…heated

in crimson passion
stroke your desire
along this ivory canvas

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2002 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-21 10:35 AM


whew!!! this is ummm....very warming
I enjoyed this

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-03-21 12:17 PM


Oh, you write the beauty of passion and sensuality wonderfully! Wish my hubby was home so we could..uh, err.. do some painting..hehe. I adored this!

Love,
Bonnie

Honeybee
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3 posted 2002-03-21 08:20 PM



This is gorgeous writing!  I love this!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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4 posted 2002-03-21 08:37 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you forever create magic and happiness with loves passion and art with your soulmate forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-21 08:38 PM



It has been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading your work....welcome home!

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6 posted 2002-03-21 08:52 PM


Very sensual but soft. lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-03-21 09:21 PM


Like this...one of my favorites...James
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8 posted 2002-03-21 10:03 PM


~~whew~~ not this was sexy...nicely done!
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
9 posted 2002-03-22 07:55 PM


Sunshine,

thank you so much for the welcome home, I geuss I have been away for a while. Licking some wounds but bouncing back.

Everyone,  Thank you all for the very kind comments, I do appreciate each one.

Duncan
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10 posted 2002-03-23 02:41 AM


If I could respond to this from the porch, I'd be a real happy dog!
A Whisper's Caress
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11 posted 2002-03-23 05:40 AM


Duncan,

(laughing)  Tracey needs to loosen up that leash just a bit. A dog needs room to run.  Sorry Tracey, I couldn't resist.

Duncan,

Thank you, your responses are always appreciated..

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Tracey
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12 posted 2002-03-23 10:49 AM


What a wonderful, sensuous picture you paint with this one Annie. I can see all the artists lining up to capture this one.

(And you know, about Duncan’s leash,  I used to let him go roaming the neighborhood, but I started getting all these irate calls from other people that he’d snuck into their backyards and knocked up their dogs. Why, he has 3 litters on the way even as we speak. Now they all want puppy support, and I’ll tell ya, his allowance just won’t stretch to that!!!!  What’s a girl to do, I ask you?!?!?! Lol. )

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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13 posted 2002-03-23 10:53 AM


im writing a book about an artist and i have alot of this going on in it hope all is well annie..

                                  ~Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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14 posted 2002-03-24 05:58 AM


very hot! I like it
A Whisper's Caress
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15 posted 2002-03-24 09:38 AM


Tracey,

I love the banter between the two of you, you should try stand up.

Thanks, I am glad you liked this piece.

A Whisper's Caress
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16 posted 2002-03-24 09:40 AM


Victoria,

I am always happy to hear from you.

A book? Wow!!! Congratulatons and most certainly good luck.


Passing Shadows,

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.

vandana
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17 posted 2002-03-24 10:26 AM


enjoyed
Opeth
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18 posted 2002-03-24 10:29 AM


A blend of passion, indeed. Truly an erotic and excellent write.
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