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Deepest Ocean |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Deepest Ocean a human heart beats in then out love flows there beyond all doubt how we love is not by will we cannot choose it yet it chooses us still the tides returns just as it leaves love is complete when another receives the heart is the deepest ocean by far and loving reveals who we truly are "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
how we love is not by will we cannot choose it yet it chooses us still Yep...I'd have to agree. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you for this inspired wisdom! when another receives the heart is the deepest ocean by far and loving reveals who we truly are Yes! And to love is always to give. Receiving love is completing a love transaction for the giver. And to receive love is a special kind of giving. To receive love makes it complete. And both must be freely given, without demands or promises or bondage results, destroying the love that was given. ((1slick_lady)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-19-2002 12:24 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, An excellent write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
do the waves of the heart flow like the waves of the ocean?? well done helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I couldn't agree with you more, this is such a gorgeous analogy of loves beginning! (kiss on cheek) May the waves of your loves heartbeats forever touch the shores of your heart and foam your dreams ocean with true happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This is just the loveliest piece~ Just lovely, lovely, lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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