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Somewhere in between |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
wanting to sit on the floor with the soundtrack you sent me loud in the background a thousand dreams, strewn around read the poems read the letters read between the lines knowing what we both know now feel it the missing you and wanting to never feel anything, again |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a thousand dreams, strewn around read the poems read the letters read between the lines knowing what we both know now feel it the missing you and wanting to never feel anything, again =================================== but then you couldnt write like this...so that we feel it.... and oh do I feel this. somewhere between the tears and the pain... we decide it was worth it... and that we will do it again. tell me what you think of my new sig. *S* Of all the things in me that I could never be ... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It seems you write my heart without even knowing it. That is the mark of a great poet in my eyes. I love this, Sir! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes i want that too |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful write, I think most of us can relate to this. enjoyed  Maree |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I could feel the ache in this one Duncan ... beautifully expressed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Duncan, this one has reached and grabbed hold....beautifully done. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, you have to have those wires hooked up again to hear it!!! Once again, you’ve penned such beauty in the ache. You’ve touched my heart with this one, as only you can do.  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wonderful |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love the way you said this,Duncan. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Well said, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Duncan I know this ache! You have penned it perfectly...but we do go on. And as someone once said... 'Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened' ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
So moving and beautiful. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan a truly heartfelt poem. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope all is alright now and you hold these memories dear to your heart, smiling with their afterglow, as now you embrace with hope a whole new joy and love you deserve so much! (sigh) This is sooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
the missing you and wanting to never feel anything, again The poem glowers with pain, Duncan.... the emotion comes through so clearly. Beautifully done...  hugggssss!copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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