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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-03-18 09:41 PM

Celestial Coast

Upon eclipse of shadows bare
of scripted souls in rainbow air
my venus lips do kiss your skin
to taste the dance of heart's begin.
You sail us slow across moon light
to coast the sky within the night
on sheets of space that sigh anew
lost in your stare of sparkle blue
of cosmic eyes that flit and flirt
in roused recall of past revert

You are my mars of swoon ignite
I am your quench of thirst incite
you drink my waves of inner sea
to surf the tide inside of me
of love in all it's reverie
in splash of serendipity

You are my sun beyond the night
in planets mesh of heaven's plight
at yawn of dawn enwrapped in glove
on wings of fate with cupid's dove
I know our bond shall last through time
for, I am yours as you are mine

By Melissa P. Monette

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-18 09:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your words of pure love always bring a smile to my face and inspire us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever find your place in the stars and the moon with your sweetheart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2002-03-19 12:40 PM

this deserved a bump up-well written -Ya know I JUST CAN'T RHYME THAT WELL

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-03-19 03:24 PM

wow. . . I love the flow and the weave of this one Melissa. . . the rhyme is almost effortless. . . (you make it look too easy!!!)

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-03-19 10:19 PM

missy,

I see that you're
on another romance
kick

this is wonderful
writing!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-03-19 11:17 PM

Ah, as sweet as honey, and I love it when you mix these romantic poems in with the dark too. I love them both and you do both emotions so well, but lady you are the queen of romance and this is proof! (and yes, send the links I like that - saves me looking LOL

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-03-20 12:00 PM

You are my mars of swoon ignite
I am your quench of thirst incite
you drink my waves of inner sea
to surf the tide inside of me
of love in all it's reverie
in splash of serendipity
============================

rhymes divine melis...
love this romantic, soulmate theme your muse is singing and the cadence made it a pleasure to read aloud.
You make me smile when you write like this

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-03-20 09:52 AM

Melissa I am supposed to be leaving for work, and this title caught me. This is incredibly beautiful. I love your writing, both the love lost and love found type.
Sandra

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-03-20 10:08 AM

Melissa from the title to the end it was truly lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2002-03-20 01:51 PM

You are leaving behind glorious smiles, Melybee...

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

10 posted 2002-03-20 04:14 PM

Sigh... you leave me in awe... again.

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

11 posted 2002-03-20 04:59 PM

Beautiful Melissa...simply beautiful! All the elements combined and spun into a delightful romantic sonnet...enjoyed!

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