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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2002-03-20 02:24 PM

Some times

a tear comes

from a place in time

done

yet still shifting

Changing sky

brings back

heart touch to eye

then lack of something

touched by soul

is all I know

Then I see in wonder new

how dew this cheek now holds

once spent

is sent into a circle

never done

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-03-20 02:27 PM

WONDERFULLY PENNED!!!! This is just so exquisite...a never-ending tear on the soul.

***Ivy Rose

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-03-20 02:27 PM

OhMartie~

'Some times
a tear comes
from a place in time'

'into a circle
never done'

I am most fond of those circles~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2002-03-20 02:54 PM

Martie,

Such truth here and some of your best work, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-20 03:10 PM

Beautiful Martie, I like how you end it. "never done" nice one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2002-03-20 03:54 PM

You've expressed those moments well, Martie!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-03-20 03:57 PM

Dang, girl...I'm going to retire my pencil...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-03-20 04:01 PM

I sit here amazed... that such a relatively few words could touch me so... This is a library addition, Martie. *S*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-20 04:56 PM

WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet freind, your beautiful words never fail to amaze me, tears always hold so much meaning and they shine in your words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-03-20 05:02 PM

enjoyed

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