Open Poetry #19 |
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Have you Ever? |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Have you Ever? Have you ever seen a shadow dappled by first of dawn, a bloom just slanted across a beloved's face like a kiss of warm, a road to place your finger on? Have you ever watched the light open and spread across the golden of a sigh just breathing in and out a dream, a naked place where skin is silken turned? Have you ever touched a raindrop that runneled down a summer's thought pulled by tides and moon change to a place where tender offered comfort? Have you ever seen the pale of the day slip beneath the line of earth then nudge the color from the bloom on the cheek of a memory just made? Have you ever tasted love? __________ written with a special muse, River, who just happened to be passing by. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always weave the most gorgeous visions of life with your words, I have never tasted love but I dream ever so much of sharing loves first kiss with my RosePetal and suckling the taste of happiness with her forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is magically delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSis~ 'Have you ever watched the light open and spread across the golden of a sigh just breathing in and out a dream, a naked place where skin is silken turned?' I have - I have ! ! And 'River' should return real soon~ Exquisite~ ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Have you ever seen the pale of the day slip beneath the line of earth then nudge the color from the bloom on the cheek of a memory just made? Have you ever tasted love? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Martie, what can I say? Except this is exceptional and.... may I borrow your special 'muse' River? ![]() Wonderful dear lady! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, For me you always paint a rainbow. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Martie, this is exceptional writing, so gorgeous in thought and intent! The eyes of your pen always make me see beauty ![]() It's a keeper! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you ever watched the light open and spread across the golden of a sigh just breathing in and out a dream, a naked place where skin is silken turned? Have you ever touched a raindrop that runneled down a summer's thought pulled by tides and moon change to a place where tender offered comfort? ========================================== I HAVE NOW ![]() and I still couldnt of wrote it and said it like this. THIS is a *sigh* waiting to happen ![]() |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have...but I've never been able to describe it the way you do.... ![]() the river was passing by....? ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Have you ever seen the pale of the day slip beneath the line of earth then nudge the color from the bloom on the cheek of a memory just made? So special this is, Martie...you have such unbelievable talent. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Delightful! \\ |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Have you ever tasted love?" I did once, and I will again....lovely Martie... ![]() Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh indeed! Oh Martie, This is exceptional! I could not have described it as beautifully as you have dear Lady ![]() adding to library Maree |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Marite ... just beautiful. The imagery and phrasing was lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love does well by your words ![]() |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Warmly romantic Martie! Especially: quote: Very nicely done! ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Indeed...very nicely done |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do like River's a'musing way of flowing through this, Flower Girl....I hope the visit is extended... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Well done, Martie. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Have you ever watched the light open and spread across the golden of a sigh just breathing in and out a dream, a naked place where skin is silken turned? Martie, I mean it when I say that your poetry quite often takes my breath away. Love the images and your creative sensitivity. I think I'm having a kodak moment!! ![]() |
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