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Dawn found us alone
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Dawn found us alone |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The midday sun burned our passion as desire consumed us Intensity came quickly leaving a scar Then wearing off as the afternoon found us wanting more The cold night crept in freezing everything in sight hands with gloves never felt so rough Weighting down dreams and hope Dawn found us alone |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent! ~Tier |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
an emotionally felt piece...very well written friend! i really enjoyed the imagery in this... take care. amy  "just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This one's making me think, walker...the glove on the hand. Hmmmm. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmm I too enjoyed this one...several images came to mind.. M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a wonderful vision, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint such magic and inspiration! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short sweet and to the point! I like these! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walker, Enjoyed the wonderful poetry and images. Love, Cerenity |
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