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[The Murder of Love]
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[The Murder of Love] |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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[The Murder of Love] And the time is Nine O’ Clock and you are listening to the news: Vaginated from the eburnean light, Deceit lay in it’s dark cloak, Silence lay upon the streets And cold fear filled the air, Love strolled gracefully, Unaware of those who stalked, Deceit struck from far behind, Bitter words and vengeful lies, Stabbed at his gentle heart And his tears fell as vitriol, As he lay upon the crimson street And as all fell deep azure, The silence on his sweet lips, Betrayed the murderer of love. "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow the last two lines tie it together perfectly! It is good to SEE you my friend  very good imagery in this piece! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Excuse me while I go cry.  I am a rabid horse. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sad! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How easy it is to be pained... quote: Well done! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The death of love is a very real loss, and a very real crime. Peace to you. Impeccable write. ThisDiamond |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured the demise of love beautifully in this powerful piece Marshalzu, very well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Andrew, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to all the lovers of the world who experience this sorrow and I pray with all my heart that true love will come and comfort them and heal the wounds! (big hugggsssss) This is sooooo heartbreaking but wonderfully written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
WOw.... Zu.... simply powerful. Damn....  Well done...I too loved the last few lines... ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow.....im awestruck here andy i really have no idea what to say! this is by far the most powerful, and most certainly angry poem ive read by you thus far. you wrote it EXTREMELY well...but at the same time disturbed the hell out of me. id like to know that youre all right ok?  email me. My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Andrew, I hate it when that happens. Wow...intensity boldly expressed. Nice job. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wow, this flowed as suspenseful as an Agatha Christi novel...superb images! Very well done! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you all for your kind words of praise Andrew "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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Aerhercnian Junior Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 10Listening |
This is a very sad poem, i hope that things get better for you good to see some of your work around Aehercnian And there stood Aechercnian silent and calm listening to the trees. [This message has been edited by Aerhercnian (03-18-2002 05:42 PM).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Andrew...much talent lies in this piece |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Andrew this was so amazing. Wow! Great writing and the last two lines are incredible. Kudos!!! Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
*clap, clap, clap* Very well done. I can relate to it... Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Okay, I forgot to put this most excellent poem in my library... *sigh* Now that it's in the past, I can give an actual reply. Or not. Wow... I'm just speechless every time I read this. And I've read it like, 20 times or something. Just... I love you sweetie... you know that, right? |
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