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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-17 04:21 PM

An Irish Pantoum

My eyes of green wear me today
In the springing of my Irish heart
The winds blew away the clouds of gray
Hearing promise of a new love’s start

In the springing of my Irish heart
I am again a young colleen
Hearing promise of a new love’s start
I’m led back to love’s sweet dream

I am again a young colleen
For by your touch of giving all
I’m led back to love’s sweet dream
To see you stand again, so tall

For by your touch of giving all
That my heart would plead you stay
To see you stand again, so tall
My eyes of green wear me today.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-03-17 04:33 PM

Karilea, this is so beautiful and sooo exquisitely penned it brought a tear to my eyes of green today! I love this and I'm keeping it....into the library it goes!
~Hugs and thank you, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Chrissypooh
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since 2002-02-19

Posts 80
Canada

2 posted 2002-03-17 04:53 PM

This is very nice loved this one

christine

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since 2002-01-02

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3 posted 2002-03-17 04:54 PM

How very sweet. I love this!

((Karilea))
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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-03-17 09:07 PM

Lovely. I didn't really see clearly how this form was done until I read this.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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5 posted 2002-03-17 09:19 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the spirit of the Emerald Isles and the Irish song fill your heart always! (kiss on cheek) Happy St. Patricks Day, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!