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rwood
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0 posted 2002-03-17 02:38 PM


In the little green block house
many whispers lingered
behind the stare
of the cloud touched girl

Standing on the edge of the gulf
white against white sands
she thought it to be
magic snow

With just a pinch of salt
in her sugar
change became familiar
in the root swing
of her red tressed lore

She buried treasure
Pieces of herself
as the sun fell
on freckled shoulders

She thought they might
somehow
grow on people

She lulled hatchlings
and lizards
with a voice
that carried
like an Irish milk bucket
strong flung from her soul

Only to turn Zeppelin overnight
by accident
from walking fences
into blooming
on one side
and dying on the other

Keds became Candies
upon neon dance floors
and her bikini
kept getting
smaller and smaller

Till one night
the tide
washed upon her toes
while she pondered
the sky breaking down
and crying
in watered color

She decided different
was grand
just like the sky was
every night she lived
to see it
as she packed up her heart
and moved back home


© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-03-17 02:41 PM



Ah Regina, this has all of the sounds of becoming another "series" from you...and of course I'm very greedy, and would like to see same...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-17 02:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful descriptive words always amaze me, you truly are our Queen of Imagery and Storytelling! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sdweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-17 03:00 PM


Okay my friend, between slinging the hammer around, you could do this as a little series for sure, and this was only to whet my whistle right?  I may call you later on

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

Saunni
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4 posted 2002-03-17 03:28 PM


rwood, so awesome and very creative I have to say! Loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-03-17 03:49 PM


rwood,
I'll never figure out how you do that! But I sure do love it. Thanks.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-03-17 03:56 PM


Fantastic Regina....Enjoyed so much!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

RMW
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7 posted 2002-03-17 06:26 PM


rwood...."...the sky breaking down and crying in watered color..." Vivid. Bob
PearlsB4Swine
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where the heart finds me
8 posted 2002-03-17 07:43 PM


Rich images splayed over a pastel setting! A treat to read and enjoy! Thank you!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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9 posted 2002-03-17 07:53 PM


A precious gift to share yourself so well...
very much enjoyed. ThisDiamond

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
10 posted 2002-03-17 08:27 PM


well done
depth, color, life. the makings of a good poem.

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11 posted 2002-03-18 03:35 PM


excellent. . . the days of a life. . . when different is good. . .

wonderful Regina. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dulcinea
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12 posted 2002-03-18 06:13 PM


Breathtaking images here! A very nice piece to read and enjoy.
wandering glider
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aloft
13 posted 2002-03-18 09:49 PM


Different indeed!  And well worth it!

---------
I have been gone awhile
so maybe this is nothing new
but it is to beguile
this image I now see of you
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Love the new pic!
Charming!

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