Open Poetry #19 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Elusive Evasive prince you touch my very depth with insatiable dreams of fairytale leaving me with only an ache for my heart of love I've waited to hold for so long; but, I must remember that the doorway to heaven is also the gate to hell of fate's elusive kiss By Melissa P. Monette |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
that the doorway to heaven is also the gate to hell of fate's elusive kiss Wowser, thank you very much!! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-17-2002 12:46 AM).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, that’s quite the twist you put in the end there. I wasn’t expecting it. Love it Melissa. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you for I believe all lovers can relate to this kind of fate, but deep down with all my hearg as long as you believe in yourself and where you are going, heaven is where you're destined to be taken to with your love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the double-edged sword eh??? well done. . . excellent in form. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, *sighs* I could read your stuff all day! I love this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
much said in very few words |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, again, you express my thoughts perfectly. Enjoyed, though its a subject that still hurts. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Melissa!! Love the ending! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellisa, Good writing, enjoyed the read. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Words of wisdom, Melissa. Nice writing! Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
When you open the door and feel the heat, you know where you are! This is excellent writing, patootie lady |
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