Open Poetry #19 |
Pure Love shape poem |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
~pure~ ~love~ that came from above a touch that flew into me granting me love’s sanctity I found peace within you I found hope living too I found love’s liberty so now I’m free love pure love ~this~ ~beat~ that burns with heat calls forth the essence of me summons my soul to fly free I yield to passions flame hear it calling my name there deep within me flame burns brightly bathes my skin and within is pure love Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-17-2002 01:35 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words never cease to amaze me, sweet friend, I just love how you always try new forms and you always do them so wonderfully! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, so now I want a four leaf clover... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey sweetie, this is a beauty! very creative too You are a fine poet indeed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, this is so beautiful and very creative! Yes, can you do a four leaf clover? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O My! I goofed! [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-17-2002 03:01 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O I truly adore you, darling girl sweet words of honey pure as gold telling us, we poets, our poetry's fine I found peace through you I found hope living too I found love’s liberty You help free me with pure love from U I love you, Mushy! xo ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-17-2002 03:08 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marsha, I love poems of pure heart..and here you even doubled the pleasure read *s hugss M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marsha...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very creative with wonderful thoughts. I love these! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Someone has 'simonized' your heart~ LOVE this one .... Tee-Hee ... remember the first WONKY shape ??? LOVE how you've 'connected' ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done! Fire in the words that glisten on these hearts... ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha.....all I can say is WOW!!!!!!!!! What UNBELIEVABLE talent you have. lots of sweet hugggssss! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely Marsha...nicely done..i will have to try and get more creative one of these days ha..hugss ~Victoria~
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Marsha ... this is delightful! Beautifully composed in both phrasing and sentiment, very much enjoyed your presentation in full! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My word! Creativity is running rampant in the whole family!! Your poetry is in fine shape, mushy lady. Fitting that your poetry should take the shape of hearts since you are such a large part of the heart of Passions....or were those apples? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sis, this is stunning work! i love how you put it into the shape of a heart... you are awesome dear...but then again you always are! I LOVED THIS!! take care and i'll speak to you soon. love you. amy "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-18-2002 08:01 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marsha~ this is sooooo Lovely!!!! I love the shapes, I am still working on mine...LOL I am a slow learner.....very very lovely!!! Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you so very much I’m pleased you like it, I’ve not done two hearts before. I’m pleased it worked Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart a four leaf clover I couldn’t do it the spacing wasn’t right, and I wasn’t skilled enough to do it. Never mind darling heart you can do the next one, I challenge you. Do you know I feel sure you could Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Joanna darling girl thank you muchly I’m glad you like it, I enjoyed doing them. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nancy darling girl no I can’t do four leaf clovers, one day maybe I might be able to do them. Thank you so much, you are always a delight to see on my posts Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy thank you muchly that is a lovely poem I greatly appreciate it as I appreciate you thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl thank you very very much I really appreciate you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James darling boy thank you I really do appreciate you taking the time to read and reply Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Melissa darling girl Thank you so much I can’t tell you how special your reply is to me, I adore your writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you very very much. Yes darling heart I do indeed recall my wonky shape and if it hadn’t been for you they would still be very wonky donkey. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This Diamond darling Thank you so much that is truly appreciated Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl thank you for that wow but it’s not that difficult to do. If you want spectacular you should see Keth’s dragonfly now that is worth a wow. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Only you sweet sis of my soul could write something so very lovely |
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