Open Poetry #19 |
Ramblings |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ramblings Words echo in my mind. Swirling with no direction Aimlessly looking for a place To quietly land with meaning Trying to connect and bond Make sense of what they mean Flowing together to become A random ramble of lines Thrown together by fingers That move across the keys Of an old faithful computer That helps to share the heart Of the poet sitting in front of it. I have to say thanks to haydenjames.. he helped with this, in a round about way "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-16-2002 11:40 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oohhhhhhh...I think that is the wonders of rambling verse, sweet friend, many times it masy sound nonsense but yet it flows from our hearts and smoothly like silk! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tara~ from one rambler to another.... Words echo in my mind. Swirling with no direction Aimlessly looking for a place To quietly land with meaning Trying to connect and bond Make sense of what they mean I sleep with words that echo....I love this!! a keeper....sooner or later we do make me sense of them.... GREAT write...Peace to you Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tara, if this is rambling then my dear friend please ramble on...me likes it *smile* seriously, this was a very good poem full of a lot of meaning and left me thinking, and in poetry that is a very good thing!! take care. your friend, amy "you can't stop |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Tara, random words are neat! Words are pretty colors Awaiting things to paint Decorate some thoughts soon Like praying with a Saint. ((Tara)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
very effective rambling. I always think its wonderful to at least write about poetry and writing when I can find no other things that give me enough words. enjoyed. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
gotta love rambling verse -Dave |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I like your rambles, Tara. They make more sense than my own. *hugs* Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yep...that's how ya do it. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Me Too, glad you said it first. Truly enjoyed this truth poem rosepetals, floria Floria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
isn't it funny how rambling can make us find what we needed to say??? great job tara. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
*BUMP* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a wonderful ramble *s M |
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