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0 posted 2002-03-16 11:35 PM




Ramblings

Words echo in my mind.
Swirling with no direction
Aimlessly looking for a place
To quietly land with meaning
Trying to connect and bond
Make sense of what they mean
Flowing together to become
A random ramble of lines
Thrown together by fingers
That move across the keys
Of an old faithful computer
That helps to share the heart
Of the poet sitting in front of it.


I have to say thanks to haydenjames.. he helped with this, in a round about way  



"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home


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1 posted 2002-03-16 11:45 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oohhhhhhh...I think that is the wonders of rambling verse, sweet friend, many times it masy sound nonsense but yet it flows from our hearts and smoothly like silk! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-17 12:01 PM


Tara~

from one rambler to another....

Words echo in my mind.
Swirling with no direction
Aimlessly looking for a place
To quietly land with meaning
Trying to connect and bond
Make sense of what they mean


I sleep with words that echo....I love this!! a keeper....sooner or later we do make me sense of them.... GREAT write...Peace to you
Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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3 posted 2002-03-18 08:31 PM


tara,

if this is rambling then my dear friend
please ramble on...me likes it *smile*
seriously, this was a very good poem
full of a lot of meaning and left me
thinking, and in poetry that is a very
good thing!!

take care.
your friend,
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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4 posted 2002-03-18 09:30 PM


Tara, random words are neat!

Words are pretty colors
Awaiting things to paint
Decorate some thoughts soon
Like praying with a Saint.

((Tara))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-03-19 12:56 PM


very effective rambling.
I always think its wonderful to at least write about poetry and writing when I can find no other things that give me enough words. enjoyed.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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6 posted 2002-03-19 11:44 PM


gotta love rambling verse
-Dave

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7 posted 2002-03-20 03:06 PM


I like your rambles, Tara.  They make more sense than my own. *hugs*

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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8 posted 2002-03-20 03:22 PM


Yep...that's how ya do it.
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9 posted 2002-03-20 03:28 PM


Me Too, glad you said it first. Truly enjoyed this truth poem rosepetals, floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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10 posted 2002-03-20 03:43 PM


isn't it funny how rambling can make us find what we needed to say???

great job tara. . .

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11 posted 2002-03-20 06:15 PM


*BUMP*
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12 posted 2002-03-20 07:10 PM


a wonderful ramble *s
M

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