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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-16 11:09 PM


More Or Less
20 or less

Less is more so they say
Except I can’t write it anyway
I always write more
And will forever soar

Marsha


Yes I did it, I don’t say it’s any good but I did it


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-16 11:17 PM




YAY!!! YOU DID IT, AND YOU DID IT WONDERFULLY!!! (smiles) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, I think you write brevity just as lovely as you write all your other wonderful poems, this is a true gem from your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-16 11:18 PM


A for effort...hell, it's all I CAN write!
Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-03-16 11:18 PM


Marsha, darling girl,

It is not true that less of you is more
For you are honey as you write, explore
And so I know that any words you write
Will always be the length that's always right.

And should you choose to do it always more
That is wonderful I know you will soar
And so don't worry darling girl it's true
That I will always want more! More of you.

Your words are always beautiful, Mushy. I love you darling girl.  

((Marsha))
-newell


Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher


[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-16-2002 11:23 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-03-16 11:20 PM



Marsha!  Marsha!!  Marsha!!
You did it Mushy Girl!
And I always knew you would!
A lovely 20 or less it is at that!
~Luv and hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-03-16 11:27 PM


Dear Marsha,
More or less,
I must confess,
You did it well!
I think You're swell!

Nan

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6 posted 2002-03-16 11:52 PM


Marsha~

this is great!!! GRAND!!! F A N T A S T I C!!

wooohoooooooo...


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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7 posted 2002-03-17 08:37 AM



Oh, yeah?

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