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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2002-03-16 09:46 AM

She feels like a poem
covered in pearls,
lost in a meadow
or ocean of furls.

Taken down into soft sand
by sun wind and sea,
glinted by moon light
protected by trees.

Whistled by gypsies
with dancing bare feet,
laughed into good humor
feeling so sweet.

Listen the poem
whose cadence is rich,
pull thread through her daydream
and take the first stitch.
___
6-01
for sweet Karilea

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-16 09:49 AM

Martie,
Delightful read. Enjoyed

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-03-16 09:57 AM

She feels like a poem
covered in pearls,
lost in a meadow
or ocean of furls.

Taken down into soft sand
by sun wind and sea,
glinted by moon light
protected by trees.
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I just love poetic payback

"She feels like a poem
covered in pearls,"

YES she does...you just totally captured her poetic grace in that phrase.
perfect!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-16 11:37 AM

Martie, you have captured our lovely Karilea perfectly in this enchanting piece.
Enjoyed this one ever so much this morning.
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-16 01:27 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautiful gift to our sweet Karilea, I just know she will cherish this with all her heart always, as she will always weave the magic of the sun with us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!