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Martie
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0 posted 2002-03-16 09:39 PM



A red rose,
dew curling around
its velvet fingers,

envies me,
passion flowering around
my hot-house heart.

© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-16 09:43 PM


With a 20 or less like this one...a rose
would certainly envy you Martie!

This is wonderful..

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2 posted 2002-03-16 10:27 PM


That is some hot-house heart Martie!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2002-03-16 11:04 PM


Martie, this is a most beautiful and perfect twenty or less.  Just lovely.  Hugs.

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Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-03-16 11:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever rest close to your heart and caress it with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-16 11:22 PM


This is lovely Martie..very creative

          ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-03-17 03:52 AM


If I didn't know you were the flower girl I'd wonder about that "hot house heart" theme. Cleverly done Martie!
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7 posted 2002-03-17 05:22 AM


Excellent...I love what it says - nice turning around of a common concept..

hugs

K

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8 posted 2002-03-17 07:30 AM



That's our Flower Girl...

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9 posted 2002-03-17 07:38 AM


love it..lucky you to be around such beauty all the time...

huggss
M

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10 posted 2002-03-18 01:40 AM


I love your sweet velvet thoughts too Martie.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
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11 posted 2002-03-18 10:43 AM


Martie~
You caught a *smile* with this one~
Hotsy-Totsie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2002-03-18 10:47 AM


Martie,
Yes you got a smile from me to.

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