Open Poetry #19 |
Hot House Heart.......20 or less |
Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A red rose, dew curling around its velvet fingers, envies me, passion flowering around my hot-house heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
With a 20 or less like this one...a rose would certainly envy you Martie! This is wonderful.. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
That is some hot-house heart Martie!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie, this is a most beautiful and perfect twenty or less. Just lovely. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever rest close to your heart and caress it with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is lovely Martie..very creative ~Vic |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
If I didn't know you were the flower girl I'd wonder about that "hot house heart" theme. Cleverly done Martie! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Excellent...I love what it says - nice turning around of a common concept.. hugs K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our Flower Girl... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it..lucky you to be around such beauty all the time... huggss M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love your sweet velvet thoughts too Martie. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You caught a *smile* with this one~ Hotsy-Totsie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Yes you got a smile from me to. |
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