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If I Ever Lost You...
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If I Ever Lost You... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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My longest day would become but a second compared to this day if I ever lost you.. Life as lived would cease.. Torment’s tentacles would entangle me as seeds of hell were planted. Dark of night would blind me as the reaper’s door closed behind. Tears flowing in a endless torrent wash away my eyes. Screams of agony, stifled by bit lips would echo within my being as despair overflowed from the well , and my will drowned. Love's whispery shadow would not grace my door again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You musn't do this...making the Sun shine tears.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Magnus, I truely hope this never happens to you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It has been that kind of day for me..Kinda ragged... Wipe thy tears from beauty for the shine of sun beams Fret not thy maid I beg thee For tis only in worst of dreams Thank You KJ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Smart Chick.....ME TOOOO!!!!...For on that day a shattered heart shall bleed endless tears upon the floor of life... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, I too hope this will never happen to you, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest love and happiness forever and ever and we all wish this for you! (sigh) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh Barry...I hope this isn't about something real for you... It is beautiful...but heartwrenching. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always true artistry in the expression of our greatest joys and deepests sorrows... But the expression of our fears are the very shields that we shapen to meet them face to face. Well done archer! ThisDiamond |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy oh how utterly unbearable is the pain written in this. If this should ever happen to you I know that your soul would bleed for eternity. How heart wrenching this is, you’ve written the pain of this soooooo well. Don’t ever lose her or yourself darling man, for where would we be without your wonderful poetry Take heart, there's light it beckons go forward to your destined fate, where you shine, I know it I   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-18-2002 11:08 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry! Deep, achingly sad, full of longing....well done! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good expression Magnus...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love's whispery shadow would not grace my door again. I love the ending...darkly romantic..so beautiful..and i loved the whole poem barry...hugs ~Victoria~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, What is lost can be found. Enjoyed the write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know this feeling. Have you heard the saying that I want to live with you forever, and die one minute before you? Beautiful love shining here. Sandra |
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