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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I was walking out the door of the Spa and he was walking toward me I gave him a great big smile  my eyes lit up as if to say “Hi there! How are you today?” He looked at me and grinned but as he walked closer I blushed and turned away  he looked over his shoulder smiling from ear to ear I guess I should have told him I thought he was my cousin Jimmy I was embarrassed in a way  but just maybe, maybe I made his day  "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-17-2002 05:23 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! Sure would have made my day. You really are special!  ((Victoria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing a wonderful poem Andrew "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
With that lovely smile you could make anyone's day.  Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
newell..thank you so much and for peeking in... thank you andrew, im glad you enjoyed michael..well i forgot to tell ya i forgot to put my false teeth in and im sure i looked real cute ha.. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Victoria hi there this is a wonderful piece from you. Oh I hate it when that happens when you think you see someone and smile and then realise they aren’t who you thought they were. You definitely made my day, and have given me a smile thank you   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria! This is great and not just because it sounds exactly like something I would do! Ha! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you krissy hon..im glad im not the only one than ha..thanks for peeking in thank you nancy..ha..yes it was embarrassing but he was cute ha..like my cousin..looked just like him [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-17-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
I am sure you did make his day! I remember that happening to me once...it was pretty cool, nice write! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I bet you REALLY made his day, Victoria... Good for you! Great poem. huggggssss! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
*LOL* I did that a couple of times too! Thought it was someone I knew...and felt my cheeks just burning as I tried to make a hasty retreat! Loved it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, sometimes such things like these can be embarrassing, but such a warm smile like this is always bound to brighten ones day with cheer! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your smiles are always contagious to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
~looking over my shoulder~ Oh~!!!! It's Vic! And i just winked at you! (problem is: i KNEW it was you!) teasing ya a bit Love the switch-hitter ending: right when you thought the poet was going to say the opposite you made HIS day! *smiles* Jeff You are a case, ya know that? hehe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH Vic....cute! I like this one...I envy him.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
LOL, nice little twist there. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
embarassed, V but wasn't it fun to make someone elses day *s..left you with a sweet memory *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Victoria...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Pearlsb4swine..i was too embarrassed for to have made mine ha.. Lyra dear..thank you..im not a flirt by nature but i certainly came off as one that day haa..hugs Dulcie..thank you..ill make sure i wear my glasses from now on ha..hugs noah sweetheart..email me and let me know is going on in your life..im sure you brighten everyones day..hugss thank you jeff..looking back at him to see if he was looking back at me haa..hugs sandra...i didnt think of it that way but i guess it was hugss thanks for peeking in hon..miss you naked...thank you but he probably forgot about it long ago ha..hugs thank you sweet james..hugsss to ya |
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